Saturday, August 6, 2011

Help me with my kissing scene?

Personally, I think it's good. It's simple and sweet. Keep going. Describe what she's feeling, how her emotions change, what she's thinking, that kind of thing. Kisses change things between characters, so don't forget to show how that changes their relationship. Things like, what did she think of him before this kiss? And how does she feel about him now?

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